7 Important Distinctions When Writing To Businesses

By Michael Stelzner

Business readers and consumers are very different.

Understand the challenges of the business audience and you will increase your success when communicating to them in writing.

Expert copywriter Clayton Makepeace recently interviewed the king of copywriting, Bob Bly.

Clayton asked Bob this important question, “Are B2B and B2C copywriting techniques the same or are they really different from each other?

What follows is a summary of the important distinctions when communicating with business audiences (according to Bly):

  1. Business want to buy. Consumers want to save.
  2. The business reader is more sophisticated. This means the reader often has more knowledge than the writer. Bob says, “When you’re writing a promotion to sell artificial joints to orthopedic surgeons, you could never know a fraction of what they know about orthopedic surgery.”
  3. Business readers read more content. Bob explains, “If your prospect’s job is to purchase maintenance services for a big factory, and your copy’s all about how to save money on factory maintenance, he’ll read it.”
  4. Business readers must take many steps to make decisions. Consumers often buy on impulse.
  5. Multiple audiences must be appeased to make a sale. Bob explains, “In the corporate world today, most buyers need someone else to approve larger purchases. And the more expensive your product is, the more buying influences are involved.”
  6. Business solutions are often more complex. This requires more explanation of features and benefits.
  7. The business buyer has dual motivations. Bob explains, “They buy for their company, but they also buy for themselves. So if I’m an IT professional, I might buy the software that I know will help my company run its business more efficiently but I’m not going to buy that software if it’s going to be a headache and a nightmare to install on my existing systems. “

Thanks to The Copywriting Maven (Roberta Rosenberg) for writing about this.

How do you take the above points into account when writing to businesses?

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  • Dianna - Good point about case studies. However, this article still applies. See this article: Ready, Aim, Write: The Value of Identifying Your Target Reader.
    Mike
  • Excellent post Michael. Great food for thought.
  • Let me add the idea that biz buyers - especially in the enterprise-level software arena - are extremely risk averse.

    The stories of bazillion dollar software projects that never worked are legion. Most realize "managed a failed data warehouse installation" isn't exactly resume material.

    I've been involved in both sides of the software sales equation, and credibility is critical.

    Of course, that's good news for writers of white papers and customer success stories... 8-)
  • Michael,

    As a white paper expert, you know that when writing white papers, you have to target the paper to your specific audience. Since B2B has a long buying cycle and many influencers, the white paper you write for the CEO isn't the white paper you write the for IT Manager.

    When writing B2B copy for generic collateral (say a case study) that gets read by many, it's important that the copy explains the product's benefits using language that everyone understands. Sometimes you really have to fight the "but our customers *are* technical" response.

    And, what you're writing is also dependent on where the prospect is in the sales cycle -- and what action you want them to take next.

    Here is an article I wrote about writing to multiple audiences when you're on a budget: http://www.dhcommunications.com/free/multiple_audiences.htm
  • Thanks and sorry I got your name wrong Roberta. I know the feeling because it happens to me all the time. Fixed it . . .

    Mike
  • Terrific synopsis of the Bly/Makepeace article, Mike. I'm going to pass it along to a client. (BTW, that's RosenBERG, like the ice-berg :=)
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