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	<title>Comments on: Killer Bullets - Preparing Powerful Words</title>
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		<title>By: Michael Stelzner</title>
		<link>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-491</link>
		<dc:creator>Michael Stelzner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Nov 2006 20:52:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Aurora - You are not the first person to call me Mark.  :)

Thanks for stopping by.  Indeed bullets are great and often under used.  

Mike</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Aurora - You are not the first person to call me Mark.  <img src='http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Thanks for stopping by.  Indeed bullets are great and often under used.  </p>
<p>Mike</p>
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		<title>By: Aurora Mae</title>
		<link>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-490</link>
		<dc:creator>Aurora Mae</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Nov 2006 19:30:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I also agree with you, Mike, that all bullets are not created equal; it's all in how you use them.

Sorry about that:)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I also agree with you, Mike, that all bullets are not created equal; it&#8217;s all in how you use them.</p>
<p>Sorry about that:)</p>
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		<title>By: Aurora Mae</title>
		<link>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-489</link>
		<dc:creator>Aurora Mae</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Nov 2006 19:28:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-489</guid>
		<description>I completely agree with the use of bullets. They bring clarity and a sense of purpose to any writing, be it technical writing, copywriting or any other form. 

Additionally, considering the attention span of the average internet user is exceedingly short, and they want their information yesterday, bullets make it much easier for a user to scan a document. 

I also agree with you, Mark, that all bullets are not created equal; it's all in how you use them.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I completely agree with the use of bullets. They bring clarity and a sense of purpose to any writing, be it technical writing, copywriting or any other form. </p>
<p>Additionally, considering the attention span of the average internet user is exceedingly short, and they want their information yesterday, bullets make it much easier for a user to scan a document. </p>
<p>I also agree with you, Mark, that all bullets are not created equal; it&#8217;s all in how you use them.</p>
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		<title>By: Jonathan Kantor</title>
		<link>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-404</link>
		<dc:creator>Jonathan Kantor</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Oct 2006 18:21:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like using bullets in several ways. Not only as a list of features or attributes, but also as descriptive paragraphs, especially with technical solutions that need more in-depth descriptions.

They're better than using a series of plain paragraphs because they draw attention to the bold descriptors that start each one off.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like using bullets in several ways. Not only as a list of features or attributes, but also as descriptive paragraphs, especially with technical solutions that need more in-depth descriptions.</p>
<p>They&#8217;re better than using a series of plain paragraphs because they draw attention to the bold descriptors that start each one off.</p>
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		<title>By: Michael Stelzner</title>
		<link>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-398</link>
		<dc:creator>Michael Stelzner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Oct 2006 22:48:15 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-398</guid>
		<description>Hi Charles - Those were actually Brian Clarks words.  Thanks for your comments.  All my best! - Mike</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Charles - Those were actually Brian Clarks words.  Thanks for your comments.  All my best! - Mike</p>
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		<title>By: Charles Brown</title>
		<link>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-396</link>
		<dc:creator>Charles Brown</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Oct 2006 21:45:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-396</guid>
		<description>Michael, I have found bullet points to not only be my best selling tool, as a consumer I have also found that they pull me into whatever copy I am reading.  

You said, "The Key to a fascination is dangling the benefits out there in a teasing manner, without actually giving away what it is."  I call this the "Cart Before The Horse Technique" (OK I know it sounds a little too cute, but it was an off day).  But not only can you dangle benefits out there without revealing what it is, you can also dangle warnings and negatives out there as well.  In both cases you create bullet points that can't be ignored.

I wrote an article about this on my blog called, &lt;a href="http://dynamiccopywriting.blogspot.com/2006/10/freelance-copywriter-secrets.html" rel="nofollow"&gt;Freelance Copywriter Secrets: A Ridiculously Easy Way To Lock In Your Readers' Attention&lt;/a&gt;.

Keep it up, Michael.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michael, I have found bullet points to not only be my best selling tool, as a consumer I have also found that they pull me into whatever copy I am reading.  </p>
<p>You said, &#8220;The Key to a fascination is dangling the benefits out there in a teasing manner, without actually giving away what it is.&#8221;  I call this the &#8220;Cart Before The Horse Technique&#8221; (OK I know it sounds a little too cute, but it was an off day).  But not only can you dangle benefits out there without revealing what it is, you can also dangle warnings and negatives out there as well.  In both cases you create bullet points that can&#8217;t be ignored.</p>
<p>I wrote an article about this on my blog called, <a href="http://dynamiccopywriting.blogspot.com/2006/10/freelance-copywriter-secrets.html" rel="nofollow">Freelance Copywriter Secrets: A Ridiculously Easy Way To Lock In Your Readers&#8217; Attention</a>.</p>
<p>Keep it up, Michael.</p>
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		<title>By: Michael Stelzner</title>
		<link>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-390</link>
		<dc:creator>Michael Stelzner</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Oct 2006 15:49:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Brian;

Thanks for stopping by.  When I said direct marketing, I should have said direct mail or consumer-focused.

All my best!

Mike</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Brian;</p>
<p>Thanks for stopping by.  When I said direct marketing, I should have said direct mail or consumer-focused.</p>
<p>All my best!</p>
<p>Mike</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Clark</title>
		<link>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-389</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian Clark</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Oct 2006 15:37:05 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.writingwhitepapers.com/blog/2006/10/24/killer-bullets-preparing-powerful-words/#comment-389</guid>
		<description>Hey Mike, thanks for the mention.

&#62;&#62;Clearly the above samples are more direct marketing focused.

I would consider a white paper as a direct marketing tool as well.  You just have to tone your bullet points appropriately for the audience and the subject matter.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Mike, thanks for the mention.</p>
<p>&gt;&gt;Clearly the above samples are more direct marketing focused.</p>
<p>I would consider a white paper as a direct marketing tool as well.  You just have to tone your bullet points appropriately for the audience and the subject matter.</p>
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