The ‘First Page’ Litmus Test, A Phone Call

By Michael Stelzner

When you are paid to write, you better get it right.

You have an approved direction, a clear outline and have discussed the project requirements. Yet, there still that chance you could miss your mark—a painful prospect.

How can you be certain you have headed off in the right direction before it is too late?

Litmus TestWhen it comes to white papers (or any other important writing project), there is no better Litmus test than simply picking up the phone.

Start by writing those important opening paragraphs and refining them so that they sound compelling.

Then call your customer or the person in your company who has tasked you to write the white paper.

Ask him or her to listen to what you have written and provide their immediate feedback, unfiltered.

Explain that this is by no means perfected, but you wanted to make sure you had the right ideas.

By running your opening paragraphs through this Litmus test, you:

  • Get the client/boss involved (always a good idea)
  • Can course correct problems very early in the project
  • Can modify important concepts that will impact the rest of the paper (like how you reference the ideal reader or what the key problems are)

Have you ever ran into a situation where you totally missed the mark? Have you attempted to share your writing early (before it is fully refined)? What are your thoughts on this idea?

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  • Joshua - Excellent story and lesson. Thanks for sharing. - Mike
  • Mike - looks like you hit a cord with this one... the silence is deafening!

    I think what we are hearing is that we have all missed the mark at one time or another, and some of us (like me) VERY badly. But ego is a funny thing and fear of appearing inadequate is verboten in today's world.

    So, with a bit of pride at being the first to comment, I'll admit it... I've messed up more than one assignment. And sometimes it was painful and costly. Here's just one example...

    A major national non-profit asked me to do their annual appeal. They were in a financial crunch and needed this appeal to win big. No problem I thought. I grabbed a few heart wrenching stories, a number of tear-jerking facts and pulled it all together into a package that would make a grown man from the Bronx breakdown and sob. It was sure to be a winner.

    There was one problem... I had totally missed the mark on the organizations tone, intensity, and ideas. Worst of all, I didn't even bother to get their feedback until I had put a ton of time into the project and was giving them the full package.

    They hated it. Every sentence of it had the Board up in arms. And the E.D. that hired me was ridiculed to shame.

    In the end they cut me loose without my final fee and were forced to rush a poor, bland letter out that returned mediocre results.

    2 Lessons here: First, the package WAS great... just not right for them. No matter how good my techniques and headers and leads are, if its not right for the client, it's not right.

    Second, I have learned the hard way (no, this was not the only time I've done this... sad) to do exactly what you have suggested here - i.e. get feedback on the main ideas, tone, and direction of an assignment before wasting my time and money being arrogant and smug about what a great writer I am.

    It seems that humility pays well after all...
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